I am a student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ.
Hi Riley my name is Leslie what you can do is check if your sentence makes sense. because sun is stolen doesn't make sense what you could say is the sun has stolen.Bye
I meant is
riley i like your no poem but check one more time if there is a mistake.if you will fix the sentences it will improve your poem.
Hi Riley
ReplyDeletemy name is Leslie what you can do is check if your sentence makes sense. because sun is stolen doesn't make sense what you could say is the sun has stolen.Bye
I meant is
ReplyDeleteriley i like your no poem but check one more time if there is a mistake.if you will fix the sentences it will improve your poem.
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